Thank you immensely for the feedback.
It’s the first I’ve had and I will make all of your suggested fixes. I completely agree. Sometimes it’s difficult to step back from our work and take an objective arbitrary look at it. Excellent analysis. I will make the changes and if it works well enough, I’ll resubmit.
– T. Lowery
A FilmFreeway preferred festival:
WATCH Winning Action/Adventure Screenplay and Story Readings:
WILDsound Festival 