ROMANCE Festival 1st Scene Script Reading: Keeping Time, by Nathan Zoebl

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Feedback Note Summary: KEEPING TIME is a truly well thought out piece, especially when the content is based on something as complicated as time travel. The writer had clearly done their research in terms of creating scenes that were cohesive even when toying with the idea of multiples of the same character from different timelines. The protagonist is one that keeps you rooting for them as they must overcome an antagonist of concept; time. A really fun piece to read through that could benefit with a few minor adjustments for clarity.

CAST LIST:

Narration: Allison Kampf

Charles/Hornblower: Shawn Devlin

Spokesman: Bill Poulin

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