Watch the best scene reading: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R2VAxv7qARQ
Lee is hired to bring the seducer of a young woman to daddy for his particular vengeance. Daddy is an Arizona drug baron. The seducer works for daddy’s Mexican partner. Then too many people with guns and the wrong ideas intrude. And the job just got complicated.
Get to know the writer:
What is your screenplay about?
I will place the logline here for reference:
A down-on-his-luck enforcer is hired to bring a young woman’s seducer back to Daddy for a particular vengeance. Daddy is an Arizona drug baron. Seducer works for Daddy’s Mexican partner. Then too many people with guns jump to half-baked conclusions. And the job just got complicated.
And now, what is the story really about. And that is that people often draw the conclusions they want to, and will not be dissuaded by facts. They will rely on preconceptions and assumptions, and jump to the most comfortable, palatable conclusions. The cliche line would be “go with your gut”, the $20 version would say “cognitive bias”.
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A secondary idea is the danger of mixing personal beefs with business (especially when the action is based on those faulty assumptions).
Our protagonist, Lee, the above-mentioned enforcer, tries to figure out what is really going on while others are going off half-cocked (with loaded guns).
Those are the ideas that underpin the story. Or we can just enjoy the action, the guys, the gals, the guns, the big old cars, and maybe even spot the hommage à Peckinpah – think The Getaway meets Bring Me the Head of Alfredo Garcia (the vibe, not the plot points).
What genres does your screenplay fall under?
a) Action
b) Crime, in the sense that all the characters are involved in crime or related to criminals, and law enforcement
c) Contemporary western, in its setting, and the number of wannabe gunfighters
Why should this screenplay be made into a movie?
Because, if done right, it would be a fun 110 mins, with enjoyable characters in a crazy action-packed situation.
And those who choose can ponder the deeper meanings of the film.
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