Thank you very much for your notes! They are spot-on. I agree that the story should probably focus more on Peter’s dilemma. If it ties in with Phuc’s heroin operation though, I’d need to walk that fine line of developing the subplots enough without overpowering the main story. – David Chan, Family Guy TV Spec… Continue reading Today’s Testimonials. Recent submitters Feedback on the Feedback on their work.
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Interview with Suzanne Wilson, Winning Novelist (DISTURBED)
Suzanne Wilson is the March 2014 Winning 1st Chapter Novel Winner. WATCH the 1st Chapter Reading of her NOVEL “Disturbed”. (performed by actress Erynn Brook) Matthew Toffolo interviews Susanne Wilson: Matthew: What is your novel about? Susanne: The novel is about a young man who is being tormented by a malevolent spirit. The spirit is… Continue reading Interview with Suzanne Wilson, Winning Novelist (DISTURBED)
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