Thank you for the feedback – it is very detailed and useful. This will be something I work on again and hopefully re-submit, taking in the points you have high-lighted.
Category: Short Scripts
WILDsound Announces its May 2016 Short Screenplay Winners (Watch Readings)
Deadline to Submit your Short Screenplay to the Festival: http://www.wildsound.ca/shortscriptcontest.html
Watch the 3 Winning Short Screenplay Readings for May 2016:
WILDsound Festival 