Watch the October 2017 Winning Short Screenplay.
Genre: Drama, Crime
A coffee shop customer allows his ignorance to get the better of him.
Narrator: Carina Cojeen
Esme: Lindsay Gerro
Zak: Nick Baillie
Man: Dennis Barham
Police: Fabio Abreu
Get to know the writer:
What is your screenplay about?
It’s the story of Zak, a coffee shop customer who allows his ignorance to get the better of him.
What genres does your screenplay fall under?
Why should this screenplay be made into a movie?
Many years ago I witnessed a waitress having her hair pulled by a huge bully of a man. I chose to turn a blind eye and that decision has haunted me ever since. I want her to know I’m sorry and that I still think about her.
How would you describe this script in two words?
What movie have you seen the most times in your life?
‘Barefoot in the Park’. It’s my “go to movie” whenever I need cheering up.
How long have you been working on this screenplay?
I scribbled the original at the breakfast table one morning and typed it up later that day. The re-write took about two days to get to a point where I was happy with it.
How many stories have you written?
Hundreds, possibly even thousands, since I was a little girl. I now have three published children’s novels and approximately twenty screenplays of varying lengths.
What is your favorite song? (Or, what song have you listened to the
most times in your life?)
‘Let’s Go Crazy’ by Prince. I love the lyrics. And what about that guitar solo! He’s my musical hero.
What obstacles did you face to finish this screenplay?
The ending was the most difficult part to write. I have a tendency to write in shorter time than what appears on the screen. I desperately wanted to get across Zak’s desolation and regret but found this a challenge within the constraints of such a short piece.
Apart from writing, what else are you passionate about?
My family, books, animals, food, politics, music, coffee. Not necessarily in that order!
What influenced you to enter the festival? What were your feelings
on the initial feedback you received?
I wanted to try my hand at writing something short and snappy. I tend to get carried away and write too much so this felt like the ideal opportunity to practise a spot of self editing. I was most impressed with the initial feedback and found the comments very thorough, encouraging and constructive. I took on board the recommendations and felt they really helped me to reflect and develop my story and my style of writing.
You entered your screenplay via FilmFreeway. What has been your
experiences working with the submission platform site?
My experience of Film Freeway has been a really positive one. I now look forward to their emails which have some great advice about festivals and competitions. At one point during the process of entering this competition I posted the wrong submission (duh!) and Film Freeway was extremely helpful and swift in replying to my call for help and sorting out my refund. Highly recommended.
Producer: Matthew Toffolo http://www.matthewtoffolo.com
Director: Kierston Drier
Casting Director: Sean Ballantyne
Editor: John Johnson
Camera Operator: Mary Cox