Genre: Drama, Romance
James’s world is pretty dull and mundane, varying shades of gray – until his eyes meet Kerry’s on the train. He finally works up enough courage to talk to her, but is left devastated when she appears to ignore him. Dejected, he doesn’t acknowledge her on their next commute, which confuses her. Kerry later tells her friend that she thought he was ‘The One’ but she must’ve mis-read the signs – the twist being that she tells her friend this in sign language.
Narrator: Julian Ford
James: Steve Rizzo
Friend: Rachel Salsberg
Kerry: Emily Weir
Get to know the writer:
What is your screenplay about?
It’s a light-hearted romantic comedy about love at first sight and the disappointment that too often accompanies this.
What genres does your screenplay fall under?
Why should this screenplay be made into a movie?
Because it’s simple and endearing! The message that love might strike at any time offers hope and light in a world that is too often bleak. I think the characters would transfer well from paper onto screen. James is awkward and likeable, a hopeless romantic – and we can all relate to that just a little. Can’t we?
How would you describe this script in two words?
Charming yet frustrating!
What movie have you seen the most times in your life?
‘When Harry Met Sally’. It’s sheer perfection.
How long have you been working on this screenplay?
It didn’t take long. The characters came to me fully formed and were so endearing and straightforward that the story flowed. If there’s one thing I would change I’d like to add more hope to the ending. Perhaps James could see Kerry and her friend talking in sign language and the penny would drop?
How many stories have you written?
Too many to count but some of these have never seen the light of day. My main writing achievements are my three published children’s novels (The Bree McCready series), a six part family drama series which I am currently working on, and the two shorts I have had accepted by Wild Sound Festival.
What is your favorite song? (Or, what song have you listened to the most times in your life?)
“Little Green” by Joni Mitchell. It never fails to make me cry.
What obstacles did you face to finish this screenplay?
Making the scene where James talks to Kerry for the first time feel authentic was a challenge. I mean why did he not simply tap her on the shoulder? But that would have been a dangerous move, as the miscommunication would too easily have been discovered. I had to keep everything brief due to the limited length of the piece.
Apart from writing, what else are you passionate about?
Being a mum. Raising my son alone has been a challenging yet immensely rewarding journey. He is my inspiration.
What influenced you to enter the festival? What were your feelings on the initial feedback you received?
I’m used to writing longer pieces with complex plot twists and turns. I wanted to try something short and snappy as I thought this would be an excellent opportunity to practise self editing. It was more difficult than I had anticipated! The initial feedback on ‘One Stop Shot’ was both thorough and constructive. I couldn’t believe it when I saw the word ‘winner’! The suggestions really helped me to reflect on my idea and think about how best to strengthen the story.
Producer: Matthew Toffolo http://www.matthewtoffolo.com
Director: Kierston Drier
Casting Director: Sean Ballantyne
Editor: John Johnson
Camera Operator: Mary Cox